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First and foremost, I like that you start right in with the action. I think a lot of writers get a little description heavy in their pr...

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First and foremost, I like that you begin with a quote. “If you spent half the time you spend on pondering over right and wrong on elim...


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I'm going to keep this short. 

As some might have realized, I've been away for a long ass time. Long story short, I have been losing interest in almost every hobby, (If you look in my gallery, the last time I wrote a story was August of 2013) and I have the unwillingness to do much of anything. I used to love writing, reading and participating in all sorts of activities; now I'm lucky if I even leave my room more than once a day. I don't know if I'll ever be back here on a regular basis like I used to be. We'll see. 

Just keep doing what you're doing. 

Forgot to Mention

Tue Jan 27, 2015, 1:31 PM
I don't usually advertise on here, but I recently began my own Gaming Channel on YouTube. It's something I have been meaning to do for the last few years and just got around to it. If you're bored and want to watch me suck at everything, here is the link: www.youtube.com/channel/UCqUtw…

I only have 14 videos and no subscribers because I'm a square, so bare with me. ( Still working on fixing audio and editing) :V 

That is all. 

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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht
Nox
Artist | Hobbyist | Literature
My Favorite Series
Black Dagger Brotherhood by J.R. Ward
Dark-Hunter by Sherrilyn Kenyon
Immortals After Dark by Kresley Cole
Demonica by Larissa Ione
The Hollows by Kim Harrison
Fever by Karen Marie Moning
Lords of Deliverance by Larissa Ione
Lords of the Underworld by Gena Showalter
If you have any questions regarding writing, send me a note. If you need critiques, I would suggest submitting to the GrammarNaziCritiques group, we are very nice there, I promise!

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Books You Should Read
Wuthering Heights by Emily Bronte
Jane Eyre by Charlotte Bronte
Catcher in the Rye by J.D. Salinger
Pride and Prejudice by Jane Austen
Lord of the Flies by William Golding
To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee
Wide Sargasso Sea by Jean Rhys
Heartsick by Chelsea Cain
Dead Witch Walking by Kim Harrison
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Jade-Pandora Featured By Owner May 6, 2016
Birthday wishes, whatever you do, wherever you are, missing you like I miss myself. :heart:
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2016  Hobbyist Writer
Hey! i'm sad to say that i've been away from dA for quiet some time. Hope everything is well! <3 <3 <3 
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Jade-Pandora Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2016
Too Much Hugging Aw don't be sad, there's big gaps of time for me too when I'm away playing dA hooky, but I never stop writing!
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2017  Hobbyist Writer
<3 <3 <3 
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LivelovelifeEleni Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Hobbyist General Artist
Hi Beautiful stranger! I hope all i s going well in your life and that you remember to be happy and I hope life treats you well because you are an amazing person.<3
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner Jul 26, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
<3
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner May 29, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Me. 
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raspil Featured By Owner Edited May 18, 2015   Writer
because i somehow missed your birthday, here's a little dance:

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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner May 19, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
hahah thank you <3 
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