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First and foremost, I like that you start right in with the action. I think a lot of writers get a little description heavy in their pr...

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First and foremost, I like that you begin with a quote. “If you spent half the time you spend on pondering over right and wrong on elim...


On Behalf of :icongrammarnazicritiques: First Impressions You do a really nice job of grasping the readers attention. This is one of the few stories i've read o...


This was a very cute story. To start off, In the first paragraph you say, "Unfortunately for me, my..." I think it would flow better if...


This piece has a very nice flow to it; I quite enjoyed the fact that you were able to say a lot with your poem without having to make i...


The first thing that came to mind after reading this was how it was it was like two poems in one. I felt like I could take out the seco...

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Tue Jan 27, 2015, 1:31 PM
I don't usually advertise on here, but I recently began my own Gaming Channel on YouTube. It's something I have been meaning to do for the last few years and just got around to it. If you're bored and want to watch me suck at everything, here is the link: www.youtube.com/channel/UCqUtw…

I only have 14 videos and no subscribers because I'm a square, so bare with me. ( Still working on fixing audio and editing) :V 

That is all. 

The Semester Begins

Sun Jan 25, 2015, 10:59 AM
The semester starts tomorrow, which means I will probably disappear from dA for a few months just like I did last September. 

I am taking six courses (Most of them math) so shoot me. 

I also just became the treasurer for an organization and will spend a lot of my free time budgeting as well as planning events. 

I just contracted with the National Guard and will continue my training to become an Officer throughout the semester. 

The next four months will entail getting up at 5am and being out and about until 10-11pm. I'll be around, but I won't be "around"

I'll be posting more discussion articles throughout the semester, so I won't completely disappear. But who knows.

Anyways,

Bye.  

Forgot to Mention

Tue Jan 27, 2015, 1:31 PM
I don't usually advertise on here, but I recently began my own Gaming Channel on YouTube. It's something I have been meaning to do for the last few years and just got around to it. If you're bored and want to watch me suck at everything, here is the link: www.youtube.com/channel/UCqUtw…

I only have 14 videos and no subscribers because I'm a square, so bare with me. ( Still working on fixing audio and editing) :V 

That is all. 

The Semester Begins

Sun Jan 25, 2015, 10:59 AM
The semester starts tomorrow, which means I will probably disappear from dA for a few months just like I did last September. 

I am taking six courses (Most of them math) so shoot me. 

I also just became the treasurer for an organization and will spend a lot of my free time budgeting as well as planning events. 

I just contracted with the National Guard and will continue my training to become an Officer throughout the semester. 

The next four months will entail getting up at 5am and being out and about until 10-11pm. I'll be around, but I won't be "around"

I'll be posting more discussion articles throughout the semester, so I won't completely disappear. But who knows.

Anyways,

Bye.  

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raspil Featured By Owner Edited 3 days ago   Writer
because i somehow missed your birthday, here's a little dance:

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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner 2 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
hahah thank you <3 
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner May 13, 2015
My latest thoughts of you were mere moments ago, so I thought I'd drop by and let you know. :hug: :heart:
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner May 13, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
This means so much to me, Jade. <3 I have been away from dA for awhile only coming in the check messages every few days. 

I hope everything is well with you. :) 
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jade-pandora Featured By Owner May 14, 2015
Ah, I knew I was missing you for a reason.  I should be asking you if everything is well.  As for me:

Health-wise, it's never about recovery these days, however, there is still much for me to feel blessed about. I hope you understand. :heart:
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner 5 days ago  Hobbyist Writer
Well hopefully everything will be okay down the line. You know I'm always here if you need me 
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HeadmistressMercedes Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Happy birthday to you, darling! Hope your day was filled with awesome! Have some cake ^.^ :cake:
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner May 9, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you very much, love <3 
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LethalKitten Featured By Owner May 6, 2015
Happy Birthday!
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Dr-Vergissmeinnicht Featured By Owner May 6, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
thanks!!! <3
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