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Haiku Prairie

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Pen and paper in hand
I look out onto the prairie
Yet, no words come out
trying something out
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dear sir or madam,
six syllables top
a haiku needs only five
or it is not one



otherwise its good you should write more ,Unless I'm rusty on my haiku skills its :five
seven
five paper is two or one you know don't listen to me if you don't want to i make allot of spelling mistakes as you can sea. but please write more like this it is really great if you don't need any pictures that means that your writing is really good or your readers have a very good imagination. i like how it explains your writers block if you do have witters block try doing something that gets rid of it

keep writing,
lostgamer64