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Mist rolls in
fearful eyes gaze at the sky
What is to become of us?
fearful eyes gaze at the sky
What is to become of us?
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the last line doesn't seem right to me
the last line doesn't seem right to me
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i dont understand what kind of haiku this is supposed to be... what you have here is probably not a haiku because the lines are 3-7-7.
3-5-3
5-7-5
3-5-7-5-3
those are trasitional number sets. i like the idea as a poem, but technically it isnt a haiku.
sorry.
3-5-3
5-7-5
3-5-7-5-3
those are trasitional number sets. i like the idea as a poem, but technically it isnt a haiku.
sorry.